After finishing the first 2 chapters, I can't wait but to head to sofurry to read the rest. This is so far a really really good short series and It got potential to become a novel. There are still so much you can use to exploit to make the story bigger, like the city which the concept is placed in, how people would react toward the couple if they find out, more thoughts of Ianthe and Chalkinos, the struggle of wars, spring training session and so on... And I'd love to read more story about that lovely cannies couple :))
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